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the drawing of Blocked redone with another scene in the back where the sword is actually fully formed...eve vs. her father

my question is does it look like a fight scene? does it need more action?

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Mood: Wow! ~tarkan-t29 Aug 21, 2009, 12:04:15 AM
Nice :) very nice job !

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Why you don't take a look on my gallery ? [link]
Or why not my my page :) [link]
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~Wren12 Aug 21, 2009, 11:59:32 AM
thanks it's my first fight scene

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"Empty your mind, be formless. Shapeless, like water. If you put water into a cup, it becomes the cup. You put it in a teapot it becomes the teapot. Now, water can flow or it can crash. Be water my friend." - Bruce Lee
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~tarkan-t29 Aug 21, 2009, 12:56:52 PM
Thanks :) me too !

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Why you don't take a look on my gallery ? [link]
Or why not my my page :) [link]
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~Nigami Oct 4, 2009, 11:08:15 PM
oh, at last I can find one, which I can undestand what's going on ^_^
I can't find here something with normal order of pictures. If you want to tell the story for somebody, why you don't use it?
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~Wren12 Oct 4, 2009, 11:18:11 PM
haha i should tell a story...well eve is in constant bicker with her father and her father has a bamboo sword hidden in his flame hair...this is where they start to fight

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"Empty your mind, be formless. Shapeless, like water. If you put water into a cup, it becomes the cup. You put it in a teapot it becomes the teapot. Now, water can flow or it can crash. Be water my friend." - Bruce Lee
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~Nigami Oct 4, 2009, 11:37:18 PM
yes, here i can see it. but for other pictures in gallery...i just have my mind blow up
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but maybe it just effect from not usual(for me) style of drawing. Usually I read more realistic stories, not only manga.
and sorry for my english >_<
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~Wren12 Oct 5, 2009, 10:04:17 AM
haha no problem...it's ok i want people with any kind of interest to look at my art

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"Empty your mind, be formless. Shapeless, like water. If you put water into a cup, it becomes the cup. You put it in a teapot it becomes the teapot. Now, water can flow or it can crash. Be water my friend." - Bruce Lee
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~KawaiiHimeArtist Oct 16, 2009, 3:35:41 PM
:icongimmefeedback:

It's a little unclear what that big picture is in the background, and it kinda looks like the the big arguement and threat scene to me. I would ad a little more movement to make it look more like a fight scene. But your shading and colors look great! =]
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~Wren12 Oct 16, 2009, 3:42:04 PM
yeah it does kinda look static...what kinds of motion should i use...see the elderman has a sword hidden in his fire hair and Python from eve's hair is trying to penetrate the shield that's protecting the older guy

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"Empty your mind, be formless. Shapeless, like water. If you put water into a cup, it becomes the cup. You put it in a teapot it becomes the teapot. Now, water can flow or it can crash. Be water my friend." - Bruce Lee
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~KawaiiHimeArtist Oct 16, 2009, 3:52:45 PM
Ok! I see it now! X3 Hmm, maybe Eve could jump or punch the air or something of that nature.
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